"McChiken116 - Patrick H." (mcchiken116)
03/20/2015 at 17:16 • Filed to: None
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http://hooniverse.com/2015/03/20/the…
So I have started writing about F1 for Hooniverse! First article is kinda rough, but my regular F1 wrap-up and weirdness will be starting soon!
DrScientist
> McChiken116 - Patrick H.
03/20/2015 at 17:29 |
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congrats chicken.
one point for an aspiring writer: vocabulary and word choice are your best friends and worst enemies. if your work is not being copy edited by a professional, it is your duty to make sure you are using every word in the piece correctly.
i stopped reading after the first paragraph because of this mixup:
the most dominate force of the late 80's and early 90's
the word you are looking for is "dominant." yes the words are related, and due to some accents, the two could sound similar. dominate is a verb, and dominant is the adjective you are looking for.
good luck, and i look forward to hopefully reading future articles!
Battery Tender Unnecessary
> DrScientist
03/20/2015 at 18:36 |
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I see no problem
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Battery Tender Unnecessary
> McChiken116 - Patrick H.
03/20/2015 at 18:37 |
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It's "duel" between nico and Hamilton, not dual.
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McChiken116 - Patrick H.
> Battery Tender Unnecessary
03/20/2015 at 18:51 |
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Fuck! Not sure how I missed that, and an editor missed that.
swaptastic
> McChiken116 - Patrick H.
03/21/2015 at 15:05 |
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Congratulations!